Winter

Those of you who don't know, I'm in a creative writing class, and it is awesome! We are just finishing up our poetry unit, and even though we already have at least 2 amazing poets in the family (todd and dad), I'm going to risk it anyway and share one with you.


Winter

Oxygen level low
Praying hard
In the snow
Angels marred
With a stone's throw

Blink twice
and the sun's away
low light--
A darkening day

Praying hard
A singing soul,
Yet failing heart
and falling snow--

Life level low




Let me know what you think. I like it, but I welcome your comments. If you have questions, ask! Love you all!